This is good stuff. I liked the piece as a whole, the overall structure and the echoing of the beginning and ending, a lot. But there were also a lot specific moments that really grabbed me, especially:
It hasn’t been a long life and it isn’t a short death. Oof.
and #14 - great little snapshot of the deatheater children.
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Date: 2005-09-20 04:09 pm (UTC)It hasn’t been a long life and it isn’t a short death. Oof.
and #14 - great little snapshot of the deatheater children.