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Random Writing Babble

I was reading an old application for a game -- think June 2008, almost exactly three years ago -- and realized that a phrase I used to describe my character's appearance back then is almost exactly the phrasing I used to describe a character in a fic I wrote this year. Granted, I was thinking of the same man while I was writing both, but the semi-self-plagiarization probably means I'm a little too used to using the same turns of phrases or something.

Blergh.

Read a couple of posts recently about POV and epithets too, things I'm not normally aware of when I write, and yep. I've been very recently guilty of them.

Double and triple blergh.

Glompfest Beta?

Due to [livejournal.com profile] alaana_fair's not-so-subtle pimping, PLUS the availability of an awesome prompt that I just couldn't say no to, I signed up for Glompfest. Which is funny, because I actually checked, and I have a total of two Harry/Draco fics in my archives, ahahaha. Also, don't look, because I'm not proud of either of them.

Anyway. Almost a third of the way through, and I was wondering if anyone on the flist would like to beta? It will probably be under 5,000 words. I hope.

Het Big Bang Tips and Beta?

I signed up for [livejournal.com profile] het_bigbang with a Slytherin-based plot in mind. It's 25k minimum, due September 20th or something close to that date, and I'm not allowing myself to start it until Glompfest gets done. I know 25K is peanuts to some of you (and you have my eternal admiration), but I've never written anything over 10,000 words. So. I need some help? Possibly a beta who will help point out plot holes, iron out loopholes and what-have-you, and then proofread along the way, if someone has the time. And if you've participated in a big bang before...

What generally works best in terms of outlining/planning so you know you'll reach 25K? How do you determine whether or not you have enough of a plot to make the minimum, but not too much that it goes way over? (I don't want to be unable to finish it, since deadlines seem to be my only motivation for writing things.)

General words of wisdom? Advice? Writing habits that really help and writing habits that really don't?

Thanks. ♥

Date: 2011-05-14 12:57 am (UTC)
ext_67624: (tomorrow we'll be free my love.)
From: [identity profile] acidpop25.livejournal.com
Well mine might've turned out longer, I don't recall, but the minimums weren't that high.But starting in June for a September deadline should be plenty of time. That's the beauty of big bangs, they have a long writing period.

Ha well, everyone works differently re. pacing? But basically I always start out most inspired by my idea early on, so I spit out as many words as possible as fast as possible. That way when my pace inevitably slows down I already have a good portion written. YOUR MILEAGE MAY VARY. My personal writing techniques are generally considered weird and ill-advised at best.

Having a beta in on the process early on definitely helps– that way you don't wind up with awful gaping plotholes in like your first 2k that fuck up everything else later on. That's essentially what I did for my [livejournal.com profile] inception_bang fic; I checked in with one beta every 5k or so, and then had the completed thing read over both by her and another beta who was coming to the whole thing fresh.

It sounds like something I'd dig, you know how I love seeing Theo in fic, so I'd be willing to beta for you. I don't have anything else on my plate at the moment, so hopefully I can keep the turnaround time pretty quick.

Date: 2011-05-14 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slumber.livejournal.com
And I'm hoping I've also given myself enough time--like, a reasonable enough timeframe--that maybe I might be able to go over it and probably finish faster too.

Haha, I don't know what mine is. Scene by scene, I guess, but I don't really get into a groove until later on, I don't know. The beginning seems to always be the hardest. Different strokes!

And yayyyyyy! :) I like your idea of two betas--one that's there from the beginning, and another that looks at the completed version fresh. I think having someone working with you from the start is going to be really helpful with a long fic, but both of you will naturally have a bias that a totally new person won't have. I might not get started on this until June, but if anything changes with your schedule just let me know; otherwise, I'm stoked! :D

Date: 2011-05-14 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slumber.livejournal.com
(Oops--I missed the important part: Thank you!)

Date: 2011-05-14 03:39 am (UTC)
ext_67624: (it's all too sweet to last.)
From: [identity profile] acidpop25.livejournal.com
Sure thing! Just let me know when you have something for me to look at. :)

Date: 2011-05-24 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slumber.livejournal.com
Hey hey, I wanted to volley some ideas around but I'm not sure I have your email address. :| Could you email me when you get the chance? My Gmail's slumber[dot]dreams. :) Thanks!

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