Help for fic: Trouble with descriptions...

[slumber]

Uh... how do men smell/taste like? Anything that would concretize the picture? I'm having a bit of trouble not romanticizing the descriptions... I'm stuck with mint and honey and cinnamon and musk. Gah!! Help!!! Must finish this by Valentine's!!!

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[isilya]

grease
oil
tar
petrol
sunscreen
shampoo
hair gel/wax (high end hair wax is often pineapple scented - don't ask me why)
shaving cream
seawater
coffee
clean skin
ironing starch
a t-shirt left out in the sun to dry

Don't forget you can always skew scent as well:

"Tom smelled wonderful, like a comfortable chair or a patch of sunlight."