Help for fic: Trouble with descriptions...

[slumber]

Uh... how do men smell/taste like? Anything that would concretize the picture? I'm having a bit of trouble not romanticizing the descriptions... I'm stuck with mint and honey and cinnamon and musk. Gah!! Help!!! Must finish this by Valentine's!!!

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[camillafarfalla.livejournal.com]

If, perchance, he's a smoker, there's a whole range - from the full gray gauzy (is that even a word?) taste of fresh smoke to the sour bite of stale cigarettes when it's been a while since he's had one. Also, hair gel. Go to a store and smell some men's gel and see what you come up with. *g*