DRABBLE: Compartment No. 9, Snape/Lily, G

[slumber]

Title: Compartment No. 9
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings: Snape/Lily
Rating: G
Word Count: 100 words
Summary: The first meeting.
AN: prettyveela requested me to write Snape/Lily, and wanted some questions answered. I doubt I did that, but, well, yeah. Also, sorry about the title.


Shiny new shoes, long pigtailed hair.

First year.

"Excuse me, but is this seat--"

"No."

"Okay."

Old chestnut trunk, barely worn robes.

Mudblood.

"What are you reading?"

"None of your business."

Upturned nose, eyes that tried to blink back intimidated tears.

Gryffindor.

"I--well. I was just asking."

"Then don't."

"You're a bit rude, did you know?"

"So?"

"Bit pointless, don't you think?"

I pause halfway through turning the page of my book, looking at her with baleful eyes to cover up the surprise I'd felt upon hearing her words, and stop.

Beautiful coppery hair, sharp green eyes.

Lily.

Comments

[prettyveela.livejournal.com]

jaslfjkal;kjdf;lakjfd;aljfsld;fjalsdj!!!

Oh that was beautiful! Simple and to the point! I love the last part:

Beautiful coppery hair, sharp green eyes.

Lily.

*sigh* SO much feeling with one simple word: Lily.

Excellent! *jumps up and down*

[slumber.livejournal.com]

Yay, thanks! :D

[sailorsimba.livejournal.com]

*g* Trust you to write it in a way where even I like can stand it. You are not getting me to admit the l-word even if you tickle me. :p

[prettyveela.livejournal.com]

lol I just posted it to the S/L community. Your description of Snape's reaction and how'd he'd size up someone is SPOT ON. I bet Draco was doing the same thing to Harry when he first met him.

Haha I MIGHT let you have Angelina a few extra weekends to show my gratitude :P

[prettyveela.livejournal.com]

haha I'm having two convos at once! XD

[slumber.livejournal.com]

Ooh, that's good! :D *snugs* And you're just asking for it now! *tickles like crazy*

[katiescarlet.livejournal.com]

W00T! Lovely. Just lovely.

[slumber.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you! <333

[lavinialavender.livejournal.com]

Woot! Very nice.

[slumber.livejournal.com]

Thanks ever so! :)